Brandon Morgan
Dec 11, 2020

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Good overview of the Treaty of Berlin. I think I understand why it provides important context for the way that peace was later negotiated at Versailles, but many of your readers might not. Add an introductory paragraph to state your thesis (the answer to your question) and to indicate how the background information you're providing relates to your larger arguments about the Treaty of Versailles.

Do the same for the background on Bosnia and Herzegovina.

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Brandon Morgan
Brandon Morgan

Written by Brandon Morgan

Associate Dean, History Instructor, & researcher of the Borderlands, U.S. West, & Modern Mexico. I just published a book about violence and the rural border.

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